Blog 6

I normally just hate revising papers, I feel like after I finish a draft then that is the best it can be.  But I've slowly been learning that that's not true at all.  After my peer responses I knew I needed to add more detail.  I think with all the extra detail I added you will be able to feel as though you're there with me, or you'll know exactly how I feel.  That's what I'm hoping for!